Comments on: Agnosis – Ch. 6 http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/2008/05/01/agnosis-ch-6/ a novel by darren r. hawkins Thu, 02 Jul 2009 15:07:58 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: wincing.at.light http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/2008/05/01/agnosis-ch-6/#comment-38 wincing.at.light Sun, 04 May 2008 19:43:29 +0000 http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-38 Just me. Advantages of being an English major and lots of experience. :) I just appreciate your taking the time to read and comment. Just me. Advantages of being an English major and lots of experience. :)

I just appreciate your taking the time to read and comment.

]]> By: Sebatinsky http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/2008/05/01/agnosis-ch-6/#comment-36 Sebatinsky Sun, 04 May 2008 16:58:07 +0000 http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-36 I'm actually fairly impressed. I've only caught 2 errors in 7 chapters, and this chapter was over 7500 words. So we're talking about 2 errors in 50k words (that I caught, anyway). Do you have somebody read over your work before you post it? I’m actually fairly impressed. I’ve only caught 2 errors in 7 chapters, and this chapter was over 7500 words. So we’re talking about 2 errors in 50k words (that I caught, anyway).
Do you have somebody read over your work before you post it?

]]> By: wincing.at.light http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/2008/05/01/agnosis-ch-6/#comment-32 wincing.at.light Sat, 03 May 2008 00:37:33 +0000 http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-32 Another good catch. Fixing that one now. Another good catch. Fixing that one now.

]]> By: Sebatinsky http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/2008/05/01/agnosis-ch-6/#comment-28 Sebatinsky Fri, 02 May 2008 22:37:44 +0000 http://agnosisnovel.wordpress.com/?p=25#comment-28 "I have subsisted on emptiness and memory along for longer than you could imagine. I have sailed the seas of the electronic night, and still I endure, forgotten and unmourned even by myself." Perhaps "....subsisted on emptiness and memory along..." should be "...memory alone..."? “I have subsisted on emptiness and memory along for longer than you could imagine. I have sailed the seas of the electronic night, and still I endure, forgotten and unmourned even by myself.”

Perhaps “….subsisted on emptiness and memory along…” should be “…memory alone…”?

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